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Professor Rebecca talked with me about my webtext. I thought if my webtext need to add something, it should be how so much study affects college students’ health. Rebecca asked me if I want to say something about family support. She did not really understand about my idea. I explain the meaning of mine.

I thought evaluate my project is a good idea because the more information you provide to your readers, the better for them to know more things. Moreover, I think family support is also a good idea add into my project, because it indeed a problem for some college students. Maybe their family cannot support their too much money, so that they have to earn money by themselves with undertaking so much pressure. That is the reason for them in sub-health condition.

I think that is all what we talk that day.

my project

During do the project of this semester, I learned more about sub-health, no matter on college students or other kinds of group people. Before I choose this project, I just know little about it, but after I am doing this, I know that there is a lot of information about sub-health I do not know. For example, the sub-health condition could lead students’ mental health problem. The environment pollution could affect sub-health condition of college students.

There are three main points of my project. The first part mainly introduce about college students’ bodies, which is really important for them to know about it. The second part mainly talks about how to eat could affect college students in sub-healthy condition, and how to change what they eat to improve their health. The third part introduces about exercise. Why college students have physics problem, and how they could change their sub-health condition through doing exercise.

I will use these three parts to introduce sub-health to college students and let them know about their bodies and do something in advance to improve their health condition to prevent sub-health condition. I also need more sources add to my project in order to provide more information to college students. Such as if the heavy study could affect sub-health to college students? If college students need more caring from family or society in order to help them grow healthy? Concerning the web and the internet become more and more widely, I prefer to search this information on the internet or I could look them in library.

the position of my podcast and slideshow

The topic of my webtext is sub-health of college students. I want to put my podcast after the first paragraph that I just introduce to audience about what is sub-health. First, in my podcast, there is the attract context in the beginning of it, which could attract the audience’s attention to know more about the sub-health of college students. Second, because the context of my podcast is talking about how emotion could affect college students in sub-health condition, which is related to the topic of my webtext so that my audience would like to read the following content of my web page.

The slideshow is different from the podcast, which have picture on it. Slideshow looks more visual so that people maybe have more interesting to see it. I want to put the slideshow after I finish introduce the “Balance of body and a healthy timetable of daily life”. Because, after to see a lot of character, audience may be tired. They maybe don’t want to read any more. At this time give them a slideshow to see, which could relax them on one side, as well could recreate their interesting to see the following context on the other side. The context of my slideshow is talking about how environmental pollution affects college students in sub-healthy condition, which is also an important topic that my audience would like to concern about.

Therefore, it is the reason that why I put my podcast in front of my webtext and put my slideshow in the middle of my webtext.

topic of slideshow

My topic is about college students’ sub-health. Since the slideshow will become part of my multimodal project, I want to introduce about how environment affect college students’ health. The pollution of environment has become more and more serious today. It affects people’s life and health, speciously for the college students because they are in growing physic period. I am going to talk about environmental pollution affect college students’ health in air, water, and food.

First, due to the factory development, air has been damaged and become more and more bad condition. College students breathe this kind of air could affect their health into sub-healthy condition or even much worse. This could affect their growing as well because they are in growing physic period.

Moreover, the water also is affected by the environmental pollution. The wasted material or water is discharged out of the factory into the river or lake directly without filter. College student drink this kind of water could cause illness so that make their bodies in sub-healthy condition.

Food is the last one that could cause college student in sub-healthy condition because the food is made up by the element of the environment. The environment is polluted so that the food is damaged as well. College student eat this kind of food could make their bodies in sub-healthy condition.

Therefore, that is the reason why environment could affect college students’ health in sub-healthy condition. Protect the environment is responsibility for all people in over the world, especially for the college students because they are the future of the world.